I've had trippy dreams like that. They're really disturbing, and make you doubt reality for the first few seconds after you wake up. Somehow you captured that here, and made me catch my breath when Soma pulled the trigger.

I know that's not very constructive, but it's the best I can do right now. Thank you for sharing this.

Interesting story, I like that Soma and Marie were on the same places. They are so different but are the same. Even had strong felings for Alle. I like the story

I like your story, hope you can make another one.