ZOMG! I LUFFS IT!

D'aaaawwww.

I loved it. The father son talk was adorable, and then Winry and Ed! Kissing! x3 Hell yes! XD

What a funny story. "Unless theres a special guy..." lol, that part was too funny.

Well, I can tell you wrote this early on, but it is still very well done. The voices are spot on - and the story well written as I've come to expect. I happy to have found your work!

I've been meaning to review this for months. x'D This fic is absolutely lovely! I adore the whole Father Hoho-to-the-rescue-and-advising-his-bitter-son relationship. My favorite line is at the very end, as Hohenheim says, "Isn't young love grand?"

You are spot-on with the EdWin! Very in character, yet heart pounding. Well written!

D'awww. It's so sweet.

...and then my mind clicks about where Hohenheim is going, and what he's thinking about and...*sniff*.

Love the story, is both fuzzy and (if you think too hard about the last part) rather tragic.

HR

Awww. LOL. Everyone's in character 3 hahaha Hohenheim's pretty hilarious xD

LOVE IT!

I can not believe this story has so few reviews! It is so superawesome and it IS linked on TV-Tropes!

I cry Armstrong-tears of joy when I come across fics from FMA's mangaverse! They are so rare! And I love the manga!

I had some difficulty locating the time and place first, it must be after the Al/Pride/Kimbley-fight, but I didn't understand why they were hanging around there for! It must be because people thought it would end there, when those chapters were out. The series upped it's epicness since then; I'm glad it didn't end there! :D

(My inner voice always says "Kamina" when I read "Kanama"! XD)

Hoho is highest on my "oh God I hope she doesn't kill him/her off!"-list when it comes to FMA. Could be my own lack of a father but I really want the line "Ed and Al deserved to have a father in their lives." to come true for them.

"He seemed to settle on crossing his arms over his chest defensively and thrust his lower lip out in a pout. Snapping his head to the side, he refused to maintain eye contact with his father." - I could see that freakishly well in my head! xD

"HAREM"! Oh holy Cow in the manga-ka heavens! I nearly choked on my water...Oh, dear...he was joking...You never know with that guy; when he has that FACE! You know, like, {8[ or something...

I kind of understand that girls aren't so crazy about the automail, and my heart really CLENCHED when I read that line. It's another thing though, to say that he's ashamed of it, as I read in a diffrent fic. That thought, just...I can't agree. It's not canon, IMO. But don't worry, I didn't et that feeling from this one!

Haha! This rarely happens, but I ACCTUALLY laughed, or at least chuckled, out loud when Ed started going "LALALALA". I know I write "lol" sometimes, but then it's always exagerated, but not this time!

I really like the more serious bits there. Very deep. And realistic that Hoho now feels tired.

And, you're making me cry too ;_; This was better than I expected. Really well done! EdWin is so cute! Who doesn't like the thought of Ed blushing. XP

I hoped for more Al, though, haha. Ah, anyway, very nice begining; it was very funny, and extremly nice end, sad and happy... sappy..

Bye

Oh wow...this is really sweet.

Great One shot indeed. Really enjoyable.

Keep up the good work!

Two words:

Love it!

I really like Hohenheim, and of course he's at his best when arging with Edward... trying to give him "The Talk" (kinda). Ed's face when Hohenheim mentioned Winry... I think that was the funniest moment of this definently funny story.

Ed and Hoheinheim's relationship is a complex and unusual one. I think Hoheinheim should teach Ed alkahestry.

aw. so sweet!

Good one shot. Captured the characters, especially Hohenheim, really well. Let's hope the real ending is as happy.