Nice one temari. Sweet revenge

Oh how I wish you would've continued this! But either way, it is so well done and stands alone SO WELL. (Though in regards to your sasusaku piece, we know they do eventually sleep together, which is great).

I thoroughly enjoy reading the battle of wits and sex between Shikamaru & Temari. They're both IC and it's great to read perspective from both sides. The ending is quite a cliffhanger. I wonder what is Shikamaru next step. I'll really appreciate if you write the 2nd part of this story.

Makes me really wish for a part 2! good story :D

Ah! You have angered me with the ending! Lol. This was written really well. I enjoyed it so much! I haven't read a ShikamaruxTemari in a while and this was perfect since I abosulutely lol Shikamaru. I love a lot of characters but it just keeps returning to Shikamaru lol. I wish you would continue this, but if that's then end I was thoroughly enjoying it! I might have to check out some of your other works too lol.

Signed,

DarkSacredJewelXoX

Hey,

It's been a while since I've read an M-rated fanfict that distinguishes itself with its plot, rather than the act itself, if I may put it this way.

A well-told, captivating tale that allowed these prideful, intelligent, yet honest and needy individuals to pit themselves against each other, intentionally or not, all while integrating shinobi elements, diplomacy and protocol when relevant...

Appreciated the twist, as well as the introspection on both Temari and Shikamaru's parts.

Good work with this!

Shadow

PLEASE UPDATE NOW!

i am seriously on my knees

Oh snap! Way to go, Temari, lol! This was awesome.

I liked this story a lot! And then I've read your NejiTen. And then I started to read Scar InoCouji.

Ah... And now I'm happy! Thank you!

I really liked this. Especially your style of writing. This is definitely a favourite!

Sand-Jounin-Temari

Really, really good!

loved this story

was so brilliantly written, I was waiting with baited breath to find out what happened! lol

would really love you to continue it but it's great on its own either way!

definitely a fav!

more shikatema would definitely be appreciated!:D

SP7

I Loved It 3