that was cool...

good story

quite good.

That was a cool story. You really got her personality down pat. And I like how suprised she is at Ziggy's insight even if she does think he's a drooling idiot most of the time. XD
But yeah seriously nice job on this.

Green Gallant.

Okay, getting the obvious out of the way. I loved the writing, from Dr. K's perspective. From the dialogue to her inner thoughts, it really felt like her. Same great job with Ziggy, although his role in this story was a bit less important (amount-wise, though not content-wise).

The story itself, I was drawn by your synopsis, which was really cool, in my book at least. Intriguing. The scenario you created, the characters you used in it, I found it made for a perfect little moment in the lives of Dr. K and Ranger Operator Series Green.

Great oneshot!

Great, you did doc k to the letter!