You stinker. XD Had me all worried that Josh was dead and Donna didn't give a damn, and then you made me laugh! I knew there was a reason I wasn't doing my Pre-Calc...

happy endign! that could have been a tragic tragic story, I would have hated it (though I love the writing still, great job) without those last five words.

HA! Good twist. Nice story. Keep writing!

Beautiful story, wonderfully written. Oddly enough, I actually did guess the ending, but probably only because I was considering writing a story along these lines myself. I'm glad you've beaten me to the punch, as this was quite excellent, and my own prose faulters in comparisson.

that was really good, I thought for sure it was C.J. and Toby. I'm glad it wasn't, that would have been just too sad for me.

excellent story, i love it. you really had me fooled there, i honestly thought she was talking about josh (i had a gut feeling that it was donna thinking- guess i was right). keep up the great writing! :D