|Reviews for Most Wanted|
| Hope and love 6/7/11 . chapter 5
i love it! Update soon!
| KFF 11/22/10 . chapter 5
It's interesting so far. There are a couple of spelling and grammer mistakes, but the plot is good and, with a Beta, you'd have a pretty good story here.
| Spyridon 10/19/09 . chapter 5
Oh, really nice chapter. I especially love the banter between Wesley and Abigail. I can't wait for the next chapter. I do hope there's a scene somewhere between Fox and Abigail.
As for canon continuity, are you changing the time of Mr. X's death to fit in with what you have in mind?
| Spyridon 10/1/09 . chapter 4
Paths has been changed. I just hope the two aunts aren't harmed by the Fraternity. I'm thinking Abigail would confront Cross if they ever see him again. But you never know. Update as soon as you can!
| zeo knight 9/20/09 . chapter 3
this is cool
| Spyridon 9/6/09 . chapter 3
Ay, Abby, just jump on him. I seriously want to know how everything is going to go down between her and Fox or if she's even going to be able to snatch him away.
Watch the use of the comma. There are some instances where they shouldn't be used. Keep in mind that commas are used for a natural pause in a sentence. Also some sentences need to be restructured for an easier flow.
| Spyridon 8/31/09 . chapter 2
Oh man, the slow buildup is killing me but damn does it help the story. If she saw Cross, I wonder if she'll be able to save Wes from Fox in time.
Talking about school, I think you mean 'principal' when you are talking about the head of the school. Principle refers to something like a main priority or something.
| Spyridon 8/23/09 . chapter 1
I wonder how much this Abigail will change the story and what is her role exactly. I'm highly interested in your take of the movie. Update as soon as you can!