 Miss Lieress 2009-11-21 . chapter 1Wow, that was great XD can't think of much more to say besides that. I loved it a little too much, I think :3
First Winthrop fic I've stumbled by. You gotta' love Underworld. XD |
 HazardousRaptor 2009-10-25 . chapter 1That last part had to be some of the best sex I've read in years. Awesome job, loved it! |
 Turquoise Hexagon Sun 2009-08-28 . chapter 1That last line was definitely a winner. Ha ha, great story! |
 647 2009-08-23 . chapter 1 Wow you came back with a bang! Good story |
 BucklesintheSun 2009-08-22 . chapter 1Probably the best written Winthrop interlude I've read. I enjoy the ghouls as a rule and it's nice to see someone like Winthrop get a public walkies in storyland.
He’d never liked Azhrukhal. The man had been a swindling jackass from the day he’d set foot in Underworld and decided he’d founded it—never mind the twenty or so ghouls living there already. He didn’t know what the hell Quinn or anyway expected him to do about it. If Barrows couldn’t patch him back together, what’d they think he could do? Make the man a cyborg? < This is an excellent thought here. Very Winthrop. Also pointing out how much Underworld depends on their only engineer. Some of them probably think he CAN do anything.
“Son of a bitch looked up my dress,” she snapped with a look that dared him to suggest it wasn’t a shooting offense. < This particular line had me rolling. XD |
 Zausray 2009-08-22 . chapter 1Oh gosh, just when I don't feel much like drawing ghouls anymore, you go along and inspire 20 new ideas! Man, time to get the old drawing hands back out of the bottom drawer. Thank you so much for being so undeniably talented! |