good job :>

Very interesting... You packed quite the mix of emotion into very few words. I specially loved the line, "Of course he kisses her back, because he's Boone and she's Shannon and they're them." That was brilliant. Well done!

~Red

That was interesting...and chilling...both at the same time! I really enjoyed it. A lot said in a small space.

This was good. My favorite line was: Of course he kisses her back, because he's Boone and she's Shannon and they're them.