 WishingOnAFallenStar17 11/17/11 . chapter 1I really think you should keep writing this. I was really upset when Jacen died too, and I really loved your fic. I have to admit I never read Star Wars or the EU, I just looked at the wiki because I wanted to read it but didn't have time to go out and buy it. Nevertheless, I found out I really liked Star Wars.
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 Cis100 3/5/10 . chapter 1So Cute, Oh My God This is one of the sweetest things that I have EVER read. I know you wrote this over two years ago, but I would LOVE to see this continued, You are excellent!
It's been two years since 'Invincible' came out and I'm still sad that Troy Denning had to kill off Jacen. When I was reading this, I wondered why he didn't do something like this.
I don't mean to like ramble one here, but after I finish the last novel of Legacy of the Force, I still hadn't forgiven Troy Denning for Star By Star when he killed off Anakin Solo.
And I was like 'You had to kill off Anakin and Jacen, really? the death of Anakin was a waist of character, and you couldn't spare Jacen? ATLEAST!
I've come to the conclusion that if I ever see Troy Denning on the Street, I will punch him in the face. Seriously.
But I say again good work! well written, you fit them both well and I liked how you seemed to make Jacen come back to his old self, while still somewhat in the dark. Superb! |
 Mengsk 9/12/09 . chapter 1Touching. It strikes a nerve. Very powerful scenes you have here. Even eloguent in a 'less means more' way.
Similar scenarios have ran through my own head. Usually involving Jacen having all his limbs cut off because that's what I think it would take to capture him alive. Some especially clever aspects here like Jaina being so hurt Jacen didn't tell her about Allana. And stripping him of the force. I would have thought of ysalamiri myself.
I don't believe Caedus would be so quick feel remorse, even cut off from the dark side. A mere dark jedi maybe, but a Sith Lord of Jacen's stature has unshakable conviction and very deep running anger. |