Touching. It strikes a nerve. Very powerful scenes you have here. Even eloguent in a 'less means more' way.

Similar scenarios have ran through my own head. Usually involving Jacen having all his limbs cut off because that's what I think it would take to capture him alive. Some especially clever aspects here like Jaina being so hurt Jacen didn't tell her about Allana. And stripping him of the force. I would have thought of ysalamiri myself.

I don't believe Caedus would be so quick feel remorse, even cut off from the dark side. A mere dark jedi maybe, but a Sith Lord of Jacen's stature has unshakable conviction and very deep running anger.