I really think you should keep writing this. I was really upset when Jacen died too, and I really loved your fic. I have to admit I never read Star Wars or the EU, I just looked at the wiki because I wanted to read it but didn't have time to go out and buy it. Nevertheless, I found out I really liked Star Wars.
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Achingly beautiful. I love the different ways you used to make TK and Jacen communicate, without them realistically being able to able to hear or speak to each other. This is one of my favourite one-shots.

TK! You could totally base a story off this you know! His recovery with this, maybe going to Hape after? XD It's great anyway. You always write these two so perfectly!

So Cute, Oh My God This is one of the sweetest things that I have EVER read. I know you wrote this over two years ago, but I would LOVE to see this continued, You are excellent!
It's been two years since 'Invincible' came out and I'm still sad that Troy Denning had to kill off Jacen. When I was reading this, I wondered why he didn't do something like this.
I don't mean to like ramble one here, but after I finish the last novel of Legacy of the Force, I still hadn't forgiven Troy Denning for Star By Star when he killed off Anakin Solo.
And I was like 'You had to kill off Anakin and Jacen, really? the death of Anakin was a waist of character, and you couldn't spare Jacen? ATLEAST!
I've come to the conclusion that if I ever see Troy Denning on the Street, I will punch him in the face. Seriously.
But I say again good work! well written, you fit them both well and I liked how you seemed to make Jacen come back to his old self, while still somewhat in the dark. Superb!

Aww so sad and sweet!

Touching. It strikes a nerve. Very powerful scenes you have here. Even eloguent in a 'less means more' way.

Similar scenarios have ran through my own head. Usually involving Jacen having all his limbs cut off because that's what I think it would take to capture him alive. Some especially clever aspects here like Jaina being so hurt Jacen didn't tell her about Allana. And stripping him of the force. I would have thought of ysalamiri myself.
I don't believe Caedus would be so quick feel remorse, even cut off from the dark side. A mere dark jedi maybe, but a Sith Lord of Jacen's stature has unshakable conviction and very deep running anger.