 thatissodawn 2/27/11 . chapter 1Angsty and wonderful. |
 Black-Rose23 11/1/10 . chapter 1Eventually she'll have to say something, although I have a feeling the longer she takes the less forgiving Rachel will be for the late-night/early-morning calls. |
 umbrellaleg 8/3/10 . chapter 1Oh my goodness! This is awesome! Shame it doesnt have a follow-up [or does it? hinthintnudgenudge] |
 Pen 5/8/10 . chapter 1 Hey, so it was good for a short fic. Very angsty and meaningful. I don't know if anyone has pointed this out, but you switch from third person in the first line to second person in the rest of the story. Just wanted to let you know so you can fix it.) |
 Blank. No longer in use 2/3/10 . chapter 1You started off in the third person and then switched to second. If you could fix that it'd be good.
Also, you put "horse" instead of "hoarse".
Aside from that I loved the concept style. Great. |
 Cyberbaby 11/29/09 . chapter 1haha quinn is such a stalker and yeah let's hope she's not thinking of say finn. |
 Owl Emporium 9/12/09 . chapter 1This was interesting... But I liked it.: |
 Dorkie 9/10/09 . chapter 1This was very interesting and realistic and I like the different pairing. |
 gemmadoyle4 9/6/09 . chapter 1the story was great, you almost felt her need.
you should write an second chapter! |
 RecklessGleekChic 8/26/09 . chapter 1This chapter is genius. Hehe.
I really like how you make Quinn seem so needy, or feel almost sympathetic about picking on Rachel, but she never actually talks. So she's a cr33pur. xD
Because Azaria Stromsis is right. Quinn is needy. Inside, and out of school. I like seeing the side to her outside of her cheer leading uniform in FanFictions. You should do a second chapter.] |
 Courtlynn D 8/23/09 . chapter 1Aw. How sad. One sided pairings are always so angstful. I loved it as a one-shot, but I can see the potential for a second chapter. -Sigh- Maybe its better that it stays a one-shot. It was a fantastic story though! |
 rockyyy 8/23/09 . chapter 1ah, i love quinn slash. this was really cute. |
 BwayBabs 8/23/09 . chapter 1Everything the first person said. There were some spelling/grammar issues and I'm not sure how I feel about the switch of POV from third person to second, but I love the idea of the plot, and I wish it was longer I want to know what happens when (and if) Quinn works up the courage to actually say something! (Or maybe she tells her at school?) Anyway, this was great) |
 Azaria Stromsis 8/23/09 . chapter 1OK, you're officially brilliant.
Quinn is so needy, and really, I think this is possibly canon. You did an amazing job and I can only hope that you will write more. Please?
Azaria. |