LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL! Ed is SUCH a perv! Hahahhahaha when I read this bit in the manga, it was at like 1 in the morning and I was firing from laughter, and this so goes with it! Well done! XD :3

Very cute - not much of a gap there, but you filled it well. Nice job!

Lol, Ed's such a perv. xP

Okay, thats funny. Great job, but I don't think Ed's such a pervert, actually you could get away with him being one. :p Keep it up!

XD possible, but i'd think that, if i rewrote this, Winry wouldn't recognize Ed due to his spontaneous gain of muscle and height. o_o I mean, seriously, he was taller then Winry and nearly equal to Hoenheim in muscle. I probably would've been like "LIES! YOU'RE TOO TALL TO BE EDWARD!" But, thats just how i see it.

ROTFL... Very funny to read all the craziest mind of Edward. Even though he say 'Get a grip, Elric!' he still thinking about Winry's panties. What the! I Love this! Keep writting!

hahahaaha awesome.I really liked that moment in the manga,so tanks for making this story XD

To good for words, it was awesome!

Oh, good lord, I can't hold back the fit of giggles. F. XD

This tickled my brain with hilarity screeching at every corner. Oh, lord, teenage hormoned Edward with a violent Winry is just the most ridiculous combination in the world. 3

XD Nice job at trying to make a perversed twist of Edward's inner monologue of the events in the beginning of Chapter 84. HAH.

I'm such an EdxWinry geek. x3 DAMN IT, ARAKAWA SERIOUSLY NEEDS TO UPDATE FROM CHAPTER 104 TO 105 ALREADY. DX

Also, once again, nice job. I liked the whole thing. Especially when Ed was fighting back and forth with himself. XD "Takeitoff, takeioff!"

XD HAH.

Good story. A little 'extension' of that particular scene from the manga.

Oh Ed you horny bastar d

Nice xD

OMFG! This was freakin hilarious! I love what went through Ed's mind especially this part-

No, no, wait-it was only the delicious recollection of his recent fantasies as one by one, the Winries appeared before him dressed only in lacey black panties with a matching bra, each and every one of them holding a wrench in a corresponding color.

Sweet.

I love this it was awesome. I'll never picture that chapter the same again.

"TAKEITOFFTAKEITOFF!" Paha. Loved it. XD

Haha, this cracked me up. Very nicely written, though I'm not sure it deserves the M rating. I've seen a lot worse under T. Still, you really did channel the Ed, as someone else said. I love the mixture of denial, horror and lurid delight in there, all mixed up and shown by the voices in his head. To be fair to Ed, I have no idea what I'd say if someone came in and started undressing in front of me. I think you pulled off his confusion and his hormones very well. Besides, it made me giggle. Lots.

As for the wrench... that thing is a monster. Poor, poor Ed. XD

OH MY GOD. I love you. This made me laugh to the point of tears. Bravo!