A great story. Very well written.

that was a really good oneshot, i have enjoyed it so much, you rock :D

Brillant story

That was AWESOME!

God, best one-shot i've read in a LONG time. I liked how you incorporated some of the actually events in J.K Rowling's version in your fanfiction. I especially liked the line, "NOt my daughter, you bitch." It made me laugh. :D Great Job.

love it xx