this was beyond fabulous.

i dont know what it is about this story...but the way you ended it, just makes me want to cry! its so sad, yet at the same time...WAH!

okay, sorry bout that...the story was beautiful! i was completely enchanted~ i think i'll read it again o.o

Great!

more please I love your writing thank you

I'm not usually a HG/DM fan, but I thought your story was fabulous!

Aw, that was lovely!

:D are you going to carry it on? if not can you write another?!! :D

oh, I love this. great job darlin'!

- WMC x

Aw!<3
The last paragraph...AMAZING!:D.

I liked this a lot. It was really well-written. i like that the smutty stuff wasn't graphic or sound like dirty-talk like a lot of smut on here seems to be :/
Good work all in all

-Shadow

That was sweet :)
I like how you built a relationship between them before the lemon.
And I loved the ending few paragraphs, they were perfect.
Fantastic piece of writing! :)

yay yay yay yay yay! i loved it!

oh Draco.

LOVED IT! Very well written I hope you win the contest or whatever it is you wrote this for! Bravo!

Very good, nice tone. I was a little disappointed that Hermione and Ron didn't wizard's duel over it. That would have being entertaining.
I think Hermione's perfectly willing to Duel Ron, thought something like that would like cause a permanent rift.

omg...this can not be a one-shot!
sequel plzz?
pretty plz?
with a cherry on top?
:) plz?

That was sweet! I liked how you made them enemies in the beginning and then had them dissolve into being friends. Great job!