Reviews for Father's Duty
The North Wyn 4/20/10 . chapter 1
Another sweet family moment! Good job!
LivingForTv 9/8/09 . chapter 1
Such a sweet little family scene...
bhoney 9/4/09 . chapter 1
Aw...that was a lovely look at caring John. Such a sweet family moment. Very nice job!
CiZiwejes 8/26/09 . chapter 1
I so could picture this...and how sweet to have Sammy blinking at John and it's even sweeter here when you have Dean calling over from the kitchen while making lunch.

Dean sounded like a mom! Mommy Dean!

Oh! I just love Daddy John and mommy Dean...and Sammy, you made me feel like cuddling him.
Mad Server 8/24/09 . chapter 1
I love the forehead feel and the "You're definitely coming down with something."
writergirl94 8/23/09 . chapter 1
really good job

i like johns reaction
NC Girl 8/23/09 . chapter 1
Nothing is sexier than a father tenderly taking care of his kid. You wrote this well and gave me a nice little mental image to end my day. :)
sidjack 8/23/09 . chapter 1
Very nice. John getting to be the best dad, when Sammy is sick. *sigh*

So sweet.

sid
Tribble Master 8/23/09 . chapter 1
dean- what an idiot. yeah for jon carring about his son's well being! Well done! WRITE ON!
Enkidu07 8/23/09 . chapter 1
Aw. I love that they are both keeping an eye on him. Great touch with the sweaty hair :) It is the little details that really round out the story!
sammygirl1963 8/23/09 . chapter 1
Oh that was totally awesome my friend. What a wonderful b'day present. Thank you! There's nothing better than seeing John tender with his youngest. I loved the fatc that Dean was surprised by the revelation since Sam had been fine ealier!
Nana56 8/23/09 . chapter 1
Aw, good one! Nicely done! :)
Letting The Rain In 8/23/09 . chapter 1
"Gently he brushed his palm over the boy’s forehead and carded his fingers through the sweaty mop of hair."

Yeah, I squeed just there. Great job!
IheartSam7 8/23/09 . chapter 1
aw sweet sweet Sammy, and Dean was prefect too. Just loved it.