...careful, Jack. As the Doctor says, time can be rewritten. Actually, why aren't you rewriting it instead of playing in the shower? ...Ok, there is the chance of the Time Cleaners or whatever they are called popping up. Still, you have a brain. Figure something out!

...And now I'm stopping raving. Do I really need to say I love this or is it self-evident? ...Yeah, I know. Better not leave anything unsaid. So yeah, I love it. It broke my heart just a bit, too. But it's really - wonderful.

Touche. It took me a long time to realize this Jack had gone back in time. Well done.

Aw, very sad.

-Nyx

I read this thinking 'His right cheek? Wasn't that where...?' but dismissed the thought.

Then the ending brought it all back and I nearly cried. I definitely gasped, I'll give you that. Really nicely done, keep up the good work!

Oh! Oh that is wonderful! Such an unexpected twist but it adds so much. Absolutely wonderfully brilliant!

Gx

Oh... I came so close to crying at the end of this. Great mix of cute and angst. Love it.

Aww, I loved it. Great combination of angst and humour. Nice work, also loved how you wrote both Jack and Ianto. Thanks for the lovely read,

Kar, xx

That. . .

that broke my heart. Poor Captain.

I love reading moments like this, very good, Thanks for sharing it with us : )

aw...heartbreaking! I love it though!