|Reviews for Two Red Roses Across The Moon|
| Arcadya 11/5/09 . chapter 21
This is so utterly perfect!
I loved all the family nuance and the Sam/Minelli/VP drama, giggle.
It's going to be so interesting when the confrontations begin ;)
Great chapter, thanks for posting!
| FiveRoses 11/5/09 . chapter 21
I'm sure I'm not the only impatient reader! But that was lovely. I liked the little touch with Lucy growing up to be a magician :) And I trust the ladies beat the men at video games?
| Aquila1 11/5/09 . chapter 21
This really is a fantastic story. I don't really even know where to begin. I know I've probably said this before, but you have an uncanny knack for making this feel 'normal' within the reality of the show, so much so that I've noticed it colouring my view ever so slightly when I watch an episode.
This is an especially great chapter. We knew this was coming eventually and I like the way you worked their discovery so subtly into the story. I expect I'm going to want to throw Bosco through a wall in the the next few chapters, however :)
As always, an excellent job.
| mwalter1 11/5/09 . chapter 21
This was wonderful!
| Heavensdarkrosechild 11/5/09 . chapter 21
fantastic wheres the rest lol
| lisbon69 11/5/09 . chapter 21
OMG! OMG! awesome! totally outsanding writing... i am in awe! absolutely perfection... wow...you just managed to captivate them perfectly... but i smell trouble with Bosco & VanPelt looming... he's upto no no good now huh?
| Divinia Serit 11/5/09 . chapter 21
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA! That's how I feel when I see a story alert from you! It makes me very, very happy! I can't wait to see Minelli's reaction (and Bosco and VP's) for that matter. I do hope you cover that! I still love Lisbon's family. So sweet! [“This Thanksgiving I am extremely thankful for lapsed Catholics with filthy minds and peachy little bottoms...”] best line ever! I laughed out loud! You have such a wonderful way of describing everything and I can imagine it happening in my head. Great job!
| House Calls 11/3/09 . chapter 20
I am *so* enjoying this story! I love how you've developed Jane and Lisbon, and how you've introduced Lisbon's family into the mix. Very well done! :)
| amurderofcrows 11/3/09 . chapter 20
Mayhem at the Celestial Seasonings factory? I'd like to see that. It's not like it would be any great loss to the tea-drinking world.
| yaba 11/3/09 . chapter 20
wow...just wow...woman you amaze me :) I loved this chapter for o so many reasons it's hard to list them all but i will.
i thought it was adorable that Jane is so well adjusted to the Lisbon family routine, isn't as overwhelmed by the hectic pace of everything. I think it's adorable that Lisbon is slowly converting to tea and that Niall totally knows why hehe ;) I loved that you had that little role reversal Jane: cook Lisbon: guns, totally thought bout our previous conversation about her being the mother wolf and him admiring her tackling skills ;)
really rarely do we see fanfic that puts Jane in such unfamiliar territory but you do it so well, especially with the little game they played and how for a while they were just a normal couple. loved the fone call from Sean, hehe "bad influence" that line was awesome.
also liked how Niall and Sam observed and decided that Jane is good for her, (the Bosco reference was very tasteful) and finally, my heart absolutely broke with the last part, where the nightmares happened anyway, its a good balance between him healing and struggle, very realistic.
the little boys warmed my heart and Lisbon's continuous strength and silent support is wonderful, such an amazing chapter :)
| FiveRoses 11/3/09 . chapter 20
I liked the whole tea/coffee thing. And see, everyone likes a bit of Disney :) You balanced the cute with the angst well. Looking forward to part IV (subtle hint).
| lalez 11/3/09 . chapter 20
this vaction bring up so many memories for jane even if the kids are only boys but there resemblance with teresa is making him think of their kids
wow i love to read the emotional rollercoaster
oh and the kids are cute
| JelloFanatic123 11/2/09 . chapter 20
I loved the ending and how you wrapped up the three parter! I almost melted throughout this chapter mulitiple times!
| Arcadya 11/2/09 . chapter 20
*Sighs due to awesomeness*
There were so many threads here but they were each given their due, and had enough emotion and fraught-ness that it was just... bliss. If I can use that would to denote my reading pleasure.
Not that the pain in some sections was blissful, but overall... yeah. Great.
| Ebony10 11/2/09 . chapter 20
Beautiful yet again. Not that I'm surprised.
“Meh. His Jesuit mind tricks won't work on me...” Waves his hand. “These aren't the 'droids...”
ROFL! That totally made my entire week. Ah, the classic Star Wars trilogy...
Also, the scene with her nephews and the light...touching. Really. I was definitely choked up.