That was an awesome chapter very Grissom and Sara. The pull and push...Loved it!

I laughed at the image of Sara poking Gil on the chest in anger. It would have been fun to see it on the show,say somewhere in season 4
anyhow,cute Drew can fallback on me him my number will you?

Wow. Just... wow.

I don't even know where to begin. The writing, the plot- everything is flawless. You are such a talented writer. I love the tension between Sara and Grissom, it sounds like it came straight out of the show. And Drew sounds like such a sweetie. Please update soon; i can't wait to see how this plays out.

Yours,

Funk

Grissom needs a head slap lol, he really needs to tell her.

Can't wait for the next chapter :o)

I'm so happy to see this new update! gosh, i was expecting he could do something about it this time! but no! he didn't, ugh!... btw, i'm really sorry for Drew, he is a great guy, but i'm glad she feel anything special kissing him! although then Grissom's behavior made things worse they already were i really really hope he could fix all this mess, asap! something like he could open his heart to her, finally!...

This story is fantastic! I just found it today and read all nine chapters. I loved the line in this chapter about Sara needing a coat or a fire extinguisher at work depending on Grissom's mood. You are a talented writer!

You've got to get these two together somehow it's always a struggle though as Grissom continues to hold back all the time.

So first off, I am SO glad you did not have her feel anything with that kiss. I mean, I knew that you wouldn't, but part of me was like, if she does, I swear she'll never hear the end of it from me! lol. Although, I do feel for Drew. I do really like him and am sad that he had to find out her heart belonged to Grissom the way he did. Second off, Grissom, Grissom, Grissom. Always the idiot fool when it comes to the love of his life. lol. Lastly, I can't wait to read more! You have to update soon 'cause I'm just going to be dying waiting to read what Grissom's response is to "What happens when you catch me, Grissom?" she asks quietly. "What happens then? Will you still be interested?
Ugggg you and cliffhangersss!

Loved this chapter and I especially loved the parking lot scene with Grissom and Sara. Hope the more GSR in the next chapter. Update soon?

Poor Drew, but he really is 'the best friend' type of guy for Sara. I love how Sara was getting angry at Grissom and I hope he tells her now!

Great chapter!

Ooh your being evil with us aren't you lol.

Loving the fact that Gil is still getting jealous and that that might be the headslap that he needs lol.

Can't wait for the next chapter :o) and hope your feeling better.

"Yes," she murmurs a millisecond before her lashes lower and her lips touch his. Nooooooooooooooooooooo !

You know what happens to writers who play with the heart of the die hard GSR fans ? Have you ever heard about tar feathers, pitchforks and torches ? ehheeee..just kiddin' hun' !

So, Greg (accidentally or not) spilled the beans and our bugman knows now where Sara Drew are...mmmmm..it should be interesting !

Great chapter. Looking forward to more, as soon as you can)

Noooo!

Wait, that wasn't exactly my first reaction. I was torn between cheering and screaming at the kiss. A little competition might be needed to jog Grissom's inner cassanova. Just a little though.

So, yesss! Go Drew go, spark that rivalry but back away at the perfect time.

:o more more more
gosh ium so addicted all ready _ as me being a zombie i think i'll let u keep ur fab brain)