Omg I remember reading this story YEARS ago (preteen) when i was first kinda learning about fanfiction and I remember loving it. Then a few days ago I was watching the breakfast club and this story popped into my head and I decided to search for it again and I finally found it! I can't tell u how excited I got when I found this story again (im 24 now) And now it's in my favorites.)

I thought it was really interesting I wanted to read on ! Lol and I randomly stumbled upon this page and just read a few lines and got hooked! Good job!

That was really good. It's the first The Breakfast Club story I read and it was excelent.

Love the film and I love your fanfic. Its one of the best "monday after" ones i've read anyway. can't wait to read your next fanfic.

Very good... I'm impressed. I enjoyed it thoroughly!

Getting good!

Love your work Anonymous!

Great story,I gotta pickup from the movie,and the Club members remain in character,I've seen some fics where the characters change radically as apposed to the original material but this is great just great

Great story,I gotta pickup from the movie,and the Club members remain in character,I've seen some fics where the characters change radically as apposed to the original material but this is great just great

this story captures the characters from the film extremely well.
I enjoyed it a lot.

I didn't read the whole story, I just read to chp. 3 and skipped to the last chapter and read the last half of if. To say in the least, I'm quite dissapointed. When your characters go into dialog, the whole story reads like a play, or as if you were in a chatroom. At those points it has very little emotional depth and no type of original writing style whatsoever. I'm not saying this to be mean, or "flame" you, if that's what you wish to call it, because this is a _review_, and not all reviews are happy "I love it, write more!". Despite the major problem with dialog, when you write those little insets of long paragraphs, your writing is WONDERFUL. If only you could write like that the whole way through, not just at the begining and end of each chapter. I hope you take my advice into consideration, not as bad criticism.
Always,
Cev

Very sweet story. I generally skip over script-style fics but the story here was good enough for me to get past that personal... whatever, I can't think of the word p
The ending was very sweet and wrapped up nicely. I also love the little in-joke references, like Ferris and Hughes Rd. _ I plan to do something similar in my own fic so it's nice to see)

Great story!-D I really liked the way that everything went in it, and the way that you wrapped it up in the end definitely gives closure to the story, and as far as I can see, kept with the way that everything would have been handled at school with the cliques. I'm excited to read more from ya!

I liked the ending to that...i thought that it was good.

Minus the author's cutting up of herself, I really liked the story. I'm a big fan of The Breakfast Club (Being perfectly honest...GOD Judd Nelson was hot then! LoL) All of the characters were portrayed/described very well, it followed the movie fabulously. It was great!