 foxyaoi123 2009-12-09 . chapter 1aw its so cute |
 Spiced Ivy 2009-09-15 . chapter 1England is such a drama queen. xD Cute drabble. x) |
 Magical 2009-08-28 . chapter 1 you should change "belle" to "beaux" since England is a dude but otherwise so cute :) I loved it~ |
 s2lou 2009-08-27 . chapter 1Actually, it should be 'MA belle Angleterre' but... it doesn't make the fic itself any less lovely. Love it. |
 Jackidy 2009-08-25 . chapter 1the my beautiful england bit is correct only since the french are prats you have to put it mon angleterre belle. I'm from England, can you tell?
France you never insult a mans cooking, no matter how bad it is. Yes your a sap but it was quite cute so the sap isn't as bad with teh added cuteness. Yes i have no idea what i am talking about :D
awesome fic me deary |
 Yume Dust 2009-08-24 . chapter 1Yes, yesh, you are a bloody sap indeed. And so am I. Hooray for bloody saps! These two just remind me of an old married couple. And they really ARE married! That's why I love 'em!
"It stinks of ** in here...Angleterre, have you been cooking again?" XDD |
 ravyndarknyss666 2009-08-24 . chapter 1KEWL FIC will u review mine ^_~ |
 imanut 2009-08-24 . chapter 1 I love it...absolutely love it! It's sweet, angsty, a little fluffy--everything I crave when wanting to read a story. You have definately made my afternoon much, much better!
There is one thing I want to point out, however. Countries are generally personified as female (the whole "mother land" thing, I imagine) but because Arthur is male, you will want to use the word "beau" (which is the male form of beautiful) instead, for "belle" is female.
That's my only complaint. Overall, you've written something absolutely beautiful!! :D |