Excellent, I just wish this story had been the actual game's story. Although technically you could say that apart from the American invasion not happening at the right time, everything went the right way. I didn't notice any errors, though I must say it wasn't as engaging as your warhammer stories (though that could be because modern day fiction usually makes me turn my brain off. It can be good, but it is frequently quite dreary...) I hope you eventually get round to finishing this, because I'm interested in the plot :)

ok i love this story and i loved the game this is epic

nice! i like the way that the story flows smoothly,

WiC ftw!