You turn something epic that could go so long in chapters into one which is good because usually I see writers of Grimmjow and Orihime going through what you write in so many chapters and sometimes drag it. I try to play the music you had for a particular section, the parts I like but they don't match well for me. You got the Grimmjow's characteristics and whats even better you didn't make him sappy.

-CPF

wah so sad they could not be together...
the plot was good...

Oh, my God. I almost cry while read this fanfic. I always love Grimmjow and Orihime pairing. I love this fanfic. I love your works, Ellie. I really do. Good job.

this was totally awesome, i really enjoyed it. i may consider doing a similar challenge...but my chill playlist is so freakin' long!

Aw, it was so cute! x3
Almost wish there was more but that was really a really REALLY good one-shot. Def a fav♥

this was really good! i liked it a lot! =]

awesome!

not bad ^_^ me like it