|Reviews for In the Line of Duty|
| Dimac99 9/14/09 . chapter 1
LOL - funny! I can believe the QM's got the hardest and most thankless job in The Pit!
| TheDreamerLady 8/30/09 . chapter 1
Teaming up with Beachhead... oh yeah!
Also, violent ninja sex. And preferring work reports TO violent ninja sex.
I think you should write more stories like this. Very good!
| TiamatV 8/28/09 . chapter 1
I'm not sure which entertains me more-the fact that each of the Joes have their own idiosyncracies in what is most likely to happen to their equipment (which strikes me as eminently reasonable, if not something I ever thought of before) or... the punch line, since I shan't spoil it for other readers.
I laughed hard enough to send the cat running. No joke. I can't believe they tried to pass it off. Or, for that matter, the fact that they got CAUGHT at it...
(And tattling to Beach! HAH!)
You have a real gift for making someone who could have been a total nonentity into someone with both personality and the characteristic grumpiness of anyone who has to deal with the Joes long-term... kudos, and thank you for giving me such a lovely, lovely laugh! _
| traciH 8/26/09 . chapter 1
That's really funny!
| HellzCrusader 8/25/09 . chapter 1
LOL i love this, it goes so well with tiamatv's latest work. omg i just knocked over the chair in sitting in im laughing so damn hard. this is great!
| outerelf 8/25/09 . chapter 1
This makes me giggle! Good job on it.
| t-me 8/25/09 . chapter 1
A brilliant little look into life with the Joes. Excellent fic
| PhantomEmpress 8/24/09 . chapter 1
Nice way to run with it! You had me smiling.
| mossley 8/24/09 . chapter 1
ROFLMAO! I thought the story that inspired this was funny, but this is hilarious! Poor Storage Vault; you've managed to give him so much personality and establish the hell that is his job in a very short amount of space. Excellent job.
| Psyk2 8/24/09 . chapter 1
Oh My! I bet I know how Cover Girls Kevlar got cut and it wasn't with a sword...