 heylalaa 9/11/09 . chapter 1interesting analysis about the connection between the character and their persona. love how you linked them.
thanks for the read ;D |
 KingsJester 8/28/09 . chapter 2Good, and an awesome job on Junpei's character, but it was way too short, and you just captured the beginning, you didn't mention his bond with the MC at all. |
 Lady Cheshire 8/25/09 . chapter 1So wonderful and such an interesting take on Yukari, especially the motivation for her taking up archery. The comparison to Mitsuru was done tactfully, as well. Thank you for this, I'm going to be following this story! |
 Prince Arjuna 8/24/09 . chapter 1your story is quite fascinating... I hope I can read the next chapter, if you have it...
Albireo Imma |
 Ariadne Eire Cerridwyn 8/24/09 . chapter 1This is a very interesting idea you have. It's nice to see thoughts on the personas of the other SEES members and interpret them based on the form they take rather than the mythos/story behind them. I look forward to reading more, so I hope that you'll continue..
Cheers,
Ari |