I see you haven't updated this story in a while, but I hope you do, becuase I like it. Please up date it soon.

*cheers loudly* More Bit/Ballad! It's just so hard to find in the Zoids fandom...this is so cool! *does the happy dance
You've got a great idea here. Angst is good...very good...*evil grin* Hehe, sorry. Like I was saying, the assassin thing is great. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with that- even if they did destroy the Liger. *pouts* I also love how you use the Japanese names. I was so tempted to use them in my Zoids fic and didn't, something I now regret- it's good to read them in other peoples works.

Erm, two little niggly points that I feel obliged to bring up.
1) It's sometimes confusing when you change scenes. In the first chapter, you were changing between the Hovercargo and the battle, and there was no way to distinguish between them. I suppose it's just a personal preference, but any kind of break between the action, like some's between paragraphs that change scenes would be good. Just makes things flow a bit more.

2) The little Bit/Ballad scene was incredibly cute, and I absoloutely love it, but I think you could have led up to it a bit more. Again, thats a personal preference, so you can feel free to ignore my suggestions. I just like to read fics where the author makes me truly believe in the pairing- not that I don't think Bit/Ballad is incredibly kawaii as it is. _

Ah, that's about all I have to say. I love the fic, and I'd love to see more soon. Ja ne!

I would love to! but, e need some info on where to send it and who to send it to! Other than that!:begins plotting
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Write more, could ya make just a BradxBit fic for me? I would really appreicate it. I can get my friend to write a yaoi for you.

aaawe cute, i hope you write more soon

so glad you got the next chapter up. i like having other people share my beliefs

that these guy look cute together keep it up.

Aww... so angsty but I love angst. I live for angst. Yes! There should be more shounen ai/yaoi in this section. To many straight couples *sighs* Oh well, I can definetily live of this for a while. Please finish, please

FINISH IT! I LOVE YAOI!

Hee hee, how cute. Poor Bit! Poor Ballad (Brad)! Jamie is kawaii and all, but MAKE THIS FIC A BIT/BRAD! I've waited so long for this shounen-ai Zoids fic, and you fulfilled my dream! Ugh, how corny I am... anyways, make Bit find out how Brad/Ballad had saved him, and make some more fluffy interaction... the scene where Brad saves Bit is kawaii and awesome! Great wording, great plot; the interaction with Brad's worry for BIt was excellently done and very yummy. You could also do a Bit/Leon. Leon is Leena's brother, if u didn't know.

Kewl story, I like it lots! _

I absolutely love this I am a big Brad/Bit fan! Yeah! Write More! Please.

Interesting. Very Interesting. Please continue as soon as posible.

*takes a deep breath* HURRAHNESS! Finally, someone who saw the obvious shounen-ai and acted on instincts! I've been waiting for a Zoids shounen-ai fic since I first saw the anime! _ Anyway, great fic a little short for my tastes and the Japanese names threw me off but overall, pleasing to read :D