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You Know Who
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
Great Job with the sewer, bigger fannies though? Bloody Hell not everyone!
Bluerain22
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
aww, that was so sweet. Ron is so adorable! Can I move in with Ron and Hermione too (and lets not forget Pig)?!

Thanks for sharing. :)
4vr17Vi
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
Very sweet =D
LVB
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
Whenever I feel like reading a quality HP fic, you're always there :)

I loved the comment about men having fannies :)
rupertlovesme
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
That one was sweet. I love how it takes Ron forever to figure things out...:D
CBGB
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
strike that last comment, sorry I didn't read the whole thing! haha
CBGB
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
this is so cute! My one point is that the drinking age is actually 18 in England, but whatever.
Cymbeliness
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
AWW! How freakin adorable was that?! Leave it to Ron to get upset about being considered a decent boyfriend! Ha! Great one-shot, really brilliant!
Euclidian
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
Very well done - I think you captured all the personalities. I especially like the portrayal of the Grangers, who would be mumbling and fumbling with any boy - it's them, it's not the fact that Ron is a wizard. I imagine that Hermione's "thanks a lot" might have got them thinking about what they'd said and how they'd said it. So, they redeemed themselves in a quite dramatic fashion with the flat.

For all those reading this who are Brits, or too young to remember, 21 was the age of maturity in the US for a long time, including voting, entering into contracts, and drinking, and I believe it was in Britain, also, for some things. Currently, the age of consent for everything except drinking is 18; for drinking, the age remains at 21. So all the references to the 21st birthday reflect elements of a past in the muggle world which has apparently been forgotten.
FinnFiona
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
This is very sweet :) I love how confused dear Ron gets over it all (though who wouldn't with the Grangers talking that way! ;) ) and his and Harry's conversation. Their card at the end is terribly nice as well. Lovely job!
silverbirch
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
I really, really liked that story.

There are so many about the Weasleys that it made a wonderful change to show the Grangers accepting him into their family.

You caught Ron so beautifully, his wide eyed innocence and ignorance (in the nice sense) of the muggle world.

Loved the line about the fannies!

Hermione was good, too. Just a young woman in love for a change.

An excellent story.
Kou Shun'u
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
aw, ron and hermione's parents were so sweet together. that was so nice about including him in their family. and all ron's questioning was quite cute.
gwen1170
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
I *love* the conversation with Harry in the sewer! This is lovely!
potterhead37
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
Aw, how sweet is this! What's amazing is that it's still sweet while Ron walks knee-deep in poop. I love the line where Ron yells that women don't have to make all the potatoes, and how he has to come to grips with being a genuinely good person. Terrific, as always.
NellieNotMolly
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
Yea! A feel good story! Lovely and sweet like birthday cake!
It's great seeing the Grangers embracing Ron as one of their own. Eighteen means being an "adult," so 21 means just being that much more grown up.
Perfect, I love it! Thank you!

And happy birthday Rupes, wherever you are! (...or were yesterday...) :-)
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