So cute! you could continue... think about it!

Aw, so cute! I knew it! I knew it was him! Aw! So darned cute! :D

:3 Aw that's so sweet!

This was sweet, I really liked it! And I'm obsessed with pre-series fics, so this made me extra happy. It was really good, and very believeable[did I spell that right? idk]. Great job! =]

Aw! I can totally imagine them years in the future, remembering those childhood days...and then they realize that it was, in fact, one another!

I really liked this. Sort of bittersweet how Mary meets Marshall and probably won't ever see him again. And how irresponsible her mother is. Anyways, great job. It'd be really cool to have a follow-up story a few years from this one, I think...

~aradonai

Enjoyed this a lot!

Would it be totally uncool if I demanded a sequel? ;o]

Aw...very cute! A young Mary and Marshall friends from the start!

I always like the stories that show characters as they might have been as kids had they met. I really liked this, very well done. Thanks for writing.

you should totally write a sequal, or a multipart that picks up from when she leaves to when she gets a job at WITSEC