 Kittona 2009-11-11 . chapter 2That's not the end, is it? 'Cause the author's note made it sound like there's more... but, but, Starscream... Poor Sky...
Awesome story. Can't wait to see what else you do with it, or if that's it, then it was good. ^.^ Very nicely written. |
 Shirox 2009-11-08 . chapter 2OH MY GOD!! DON'T STOP HERE! I NEED MORE! ;_; Really hun' i luv this story already so please, please update! *__* |
 Kyme 2009-10-12 . chapter 2 /cries/ Oh... Starscream... /sniff/ I love their characterisations in this fic. Please do continue. |
 redamiB6147 2009-10-01 . chapter 2That...was great. And so sad. I really like this one as well.
Heck, I really love your work. |
 Uniasus 2009-09-21 . chapter 2 No! Not Star! *sniffs* Here I was, expecting a wonderful story between the two of them, and you kill him in the second chapter! *shakes fist* You better rectify that in the next update. |
 Dvana 2009-09-14 . chapter 2I like the way this is going. Very nice work, and an interesting take on things. Thanks for sharing it. |
 Shadow Wolf 359 2009-09-08 . chapter 2I really don't know how I was still surprised that Megatron was leading the uprising. I was so wrapped up in Megatron being over-protective of Creator's Little Mech, it hadn't seemed possible. Well done!
Poor Starscream, but he always gets the short end of the stick, and poor Skyfire is just in a state of "Omgwhat".
I think the part I'm most interested in seeing is Megatron when he realizes that his rebellion, his uprising, killed his son. And Optimus's reaction to that too.
Let this be a lesson, kiddies: Divorce sucks. |
 mdnytryder 2009-09-08 . chapter 2Oh no! You killed him. Poor Skyfire, real life isn't as pure as he would like to believe.
I can't believe you left us with such a cliffhanger. |
 Wol Lo 2009-09-07 . chapter 2WHAT's THIS! You killed Star! ;_; How could you?!
But this's interesting. Please update soon. I'm dying to see next chapter. T_T |
 Carmilla DeWinter 2009-09-07 . chapter 2Whoa, evil cliffhanger. As it is, I think I might have a vague idea what Starscream has done.
Sadly, Megatron's involvement isn't quite the big surprise. |
 Starfire201 2009-09-07 . chapter 2 I was actually hoping you'd do this one next, and it was much appreciated. You do know how to do a cliffhanger right. I wasn't expecting the matter with the spark to arise at this moment, but it seems appropriate somehow. I also get the feeling the meaning of the title is about to kick in. See you again soon. |
 xStarSaber 2009-09-07 . chapter 2Oh no Screamer! ;_; Please update soon!! |
 Carmilla DeWinter 2009-08-26 . chapter 1Heh. Cool beginning. I really like your rendition of those two so far. Plus Megs, he's interesting to see, too. |
 Eliza Acheron 2009-08-25 . chapter 1 Gah! Awesome! |
 xStarSaber 2009-08-25 . chapter 1See what overprotective parents turn their kids into. XD |