That's not the end, is it? 'Cause the author's note made it sound like there's more... but, but, Starscream... Poor Sky...

Awesome story. Can't wait to see what else you do with it, or if that's it, then it was good. ^.^ Very nicely written.

OH MY GOD!! DON'T STOP HERE! I NEED MORE! ;_; Really hun' i luv this story already so please, please update! *__*

/cries/ Oh... Starscream... /sniff/ I love their characterisations in this fic. Please do continue.

That...was great. And so sad. I really like this one as well.

Heck, I really love your work.

No! Not Star! *sniffs* Here I was, expecting a wonderful story between the two of them, and you kill him in the second chapter! *shakes fist* You better rectify that in the next update.

I like the way this is going. Very nice work, and an interesting take on things. Thanks for sharing it.

I really don't know how I was still surprised that Megatron was leading the uprising. I was so wrapped up in Megatron being over-protective of Creator's Little Mech, it hadn't seemed possible. Well done!

Poor Starscream, but he always gets the short end of the stick, and poor Skyfire is just in a state of "Omgwhat".

I think the part I'm most interested in seeing is Megatron when he realizes that his rebellion, his uprising, killed his son. And Optimus's reaction to that too.

Let this be a lesson, kiddies: Divorce sucks.

Oh no! You killed him. Poor Skyfire, real life isn't as pure as he would like to believe.
I can't believe you left us with such a cliffhanger.

WHAT's THIS! You killed Star! ;_; How could you?!

But this's interesting. Please update soon. I'm dying to see next chapter. T_T

Whoa, evil cliffhanger. As it is, I think I might have a vague idea what Starscream has done.

Sadly, Megatron's involvement isn't quite the big surprise.

I was actually hoping you'd do this one next, and it was much appreciated. You do know how to do a cliffhanger right. I wasn't expecting the matter with the spark to arise at this moment, but it seems appropriate somehow. I also get the feeling the meaning of the title is about to kick in. See you again soon.

Oh no Screamer! ;_; Please update soon!!

Heh. Cool beginning. I really like your rendition of those two so far. Plus Megs, he's interesting to see, too.

Gah! Awesome!

See what overprotective parents turn their kids into. XD