It took me so long to review! Gomenasai, lol.

Wow, this was a real compelling and oddly amusing ficlet. It seemed like the only one who was really shook up about the whole thing was Ino, the one who wanted to end the relationship in the first place. Poor Kiba really didn't get a thing she was saying about the whole 'white horse' thing either.

Who would have thought Ino and Sai would find love together? Interesting pairing, by the way.

Great story, loves. It was worth the read.

~Crimson Sakura Princess~

I may have found this more hilarious than you intended it to be.

I interpreted it as Ino looking too much into Kiba's feelings when he wasn't really AS bothered. And, Ino's whole 'White Horse and Prince' talk was rather confusing (for me it was). I really liked it, adding it to my favs :D

omigod! that story was amazing! definately loved the way Ino described Kiba and and how her knees were weak but still broke up with him! God who would want skinny tummy shirt sai when you can have brawny hunk o' man kiba? m excuse me while I giggle.

LOL. That was hysterical... I like how you off-handedly skewered Sai as well as the principals...

Ahah. Funny.

That was the most amusing break-up story ever. I could really believe Ino being so overdramatic.

My cheeks hurt from smiling for so long. I find myself hoping she stays with Sai because he would be completely confused if they broke up. Might have gone too far with the Kiba comment in the end.

Lol, Kiba doesn't seem upset at all. This really reminds me of the story I put up yesterday, for some odd reason... oh wait, no, I know why- it's also Ino and Kiba. =P And a break-up. Which happens before the story, but it is mentioned =P

But it was funny how Ino kept thinking about how Kiba made her breathless and maybe it wouldn't be too bad to just have that one last romp... but no, way too cruel =P

It was funny.

And Kiba didn't get that whole white horse thing at all.

I enjoyed this. I did.

I can imagine Ino being all overdramatic like this.

LRS,

I Loved it! Ino breaking up with Kiba! hehe, Ino doesn't know Kiba that well does she! Kiba won't be broken up about it, He's the bad boy of the Hidden Leaf Village! Women flock to Kiba because he is who he is.

Kiba is the guy that mama's warned their daughters about. Kiba is the guy who causes dads to go out and purchase shotguns!

Kiba, the devastatingly handsome Konoha Bad Boy! IMO, Kiba needs to hang out with Jiraiya for a bit. Other than Hinata (who is head over heels in love with the other Konoha Bad Boy), I cannot see Kiba with any kunoichi of the Leaf.

Strike that... the only other Konoha Kunoichi I can imagine Kiba with is Konoha's original bad girl... Anko Mitarashi. (hmm I think there's a fic in there somewhere)


Keep up the great work, LRS! I can't wait till your next work of literary art! :)

KW