Awwwww

Please please please continue this story. It is sooo sweet and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Thanks

so sweet and cute

i really enjoyed this. i love how it was creepy and still sweet, and you handled bella finding out what he was doing really well. their kiss(es) was really nice :)

I love this, wish you could develop this into a story :)

Too sweet, just too sweet. And trust me, that is a good thing. I LOVE IT! Great job!

awe such cute human fluff. I love it.

You so totally should have won. You literally took the challenge name and ran with it. I love that. Great story of course ;)

loved it.

i'm all grinny and happy because i LOVED IT!

absolutely adorable. i love 15 year old edward.

i would absolutely love you if you continued this :)

Oh my goodness, that was fantastic. Really really sweet and wonderful!

I loved how you did it from Edward's point of view too. You did an excellent job!

Jill

sorry you didnt win hun but hey I thought it was great..and the fact that you took the name of the challenge literally made it awesome..hehe

aw loved it

I loved this... are you going to continue the one-shot?

I thought it was good when I voted for it in te challenge, and I STILL think it's good!

Is this gonna continue, or is it a one-shot?