decent chapter

good chapte ri love this fic its verry good and i had forgoten how cold cornilla was in season 1 and i cant wait to see what happens next

perhaps nunnally will show her self to cornilla after all familly is inportant to cornilla so that could be a good plan to off set her

and suzaku is alive i see (drat)

any ways update soon and all that

so says i THW NUMBER 1 YURI FAN GIRL FO THE WORLD *strikes a dramatic pose*

interesting fic.keep it up

Huh? Black uniform, hair tied back in a braid, and sunglasses? That's IT? At the very least, I was expecting some sorta cool visor, or maybe even a mask like Zero's. When mention was made of Nunnally wearing a "mask and costume" I expected the mask to be something other than a simple pair of sunglasses. Otherwise, the chapter was good.

i wonder if Nunnaly's actions will parallel with Lelouch...? hm

good chapter as allways i liked it i love this fic its so good i hope kallen still gets the guren (i love that thing)any wyas update soon

o and u should discript nunallys costume better

so says i THE NUMBER 1 YURI FAN GIRL OF THE WORLD *strikes a dramatic pose*

good chapter as allways and nina x milly is 1 of my fave couples (they so belong together)

and poor kallen she is allwaysi n such bad situwations

good fic

so Kallen knows wow, didnt see that coming, what a plot twist, anyways good update, keep going!

This is an interesting fic so far - it uses a similar premise to an idea I've had brewing in my head for a while, although it takes a different direction (I had planned to have Lelouch be the blinded one, instead of killing him, which hadn't even occurred to me). I like that you're rapidly diverging from the events of the series, with Nunnally aiding the rebels in a different way to Lelouch, and other differences like Milly and Nina apparently being together.

My main piece of constructive criticism would be that the story moves too fast, making the chapters too short and lacking in depth. I would happily read twice as much detail about your alternate universe. That aside, there are a few spelling and grammar errors, e.g. in this chapter:

-“You didn't do out there, did you?” should presumably read “You didn't go out there, did you?”
-'The busty student council president grinned as Milly said' - Milly has apparently duplicated herself! I assume this should read something like 'The busty student council president grinned and said'.

hahaha good old milly she is drawn to places she can spread chaos and and insanity good chapter as allways cant wait to see what happens next

o and which of the 2 lovelys will nunnaly love C2 or kallen i cant wait to find out

so says i THE NUMBER 1 YURI FAN GIRL OF THE WORLD *strikes a dramatic pose*

Nice dude. No, wait... AWESOME, dude.

I just hope that Nunnally won't be a lesbian.

Do you write regularly?

Good story so far...5/5

The story was just epic. I'm impressed you were actually able to write this much this well, most people don't get past chapter 1 on this kind of story. I'll keep reading ^_^

It's interesting how this retelling of Code Geass works in Nightmare of Nunnally elements, since she's the main character of it but this story blends the two to become its own unique thing.
No glaring errors but its a bit short for me to weigh in with more than that you've made a good start.