 aminaluvr4life 2009-12-04 . chapter 4I really loved the part where Ciel came and talked to her. You go Ciel, you tell that evil girl *rooting in the background with a ceil banner* ^_^
I can't wait to see what happens next!
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 DescendantoftheRose 2009-12-03 . chapter 3so good and i wonder why i write the crap i do. T.T Oh well . I lov it and i hope you update soon and the scene with the kitty was really well written.:D |
 IRobbedRobin 2009-11-30 . chapter 3;A; That poor baby! Speaking of possibly both the kitten and Sebastian (though sebastian is NOT quite a baby...)
God, you have created a MONSTER. But I like the story! I want to see what happens. |
 IRobbedRobin 2009-11-30 . chapter 1OH I AM /SUCH/ A LOSER. *cries*
I thought this was something I read already and..gahh. XD Sorry, sorry. I'll start from the beginning. ;A;'' *moment of reading*
Wow. That's all I can say. I hate skye, but I really like how you write. LOL, I'm repeating what I wrote on chapt 4.
Now, I shall continue reading... |
 IRobbedRobin 2009-11-30 . chapter 4Who in the world is skye? Is she some bitch!mary-sue? Why am I supposed confused? Why do I want to punch skye and make Ciel come back?
I would have to say as much as I really hated your character I still liked your story. XD I think it's all the descriptive words and metaphors and all that good stuff.
Haha, I love your disclaimer," I don't even /want/ to own Skye..." |
 Inviktus 2009-11-30 . chapter 4Oh my god. Is it stupid to hate a fictional character? I guess it is. But whatever. I hate Skye. I absolutely do not like her. I hate her, goddammit. Foolish egotistical brat with sexual issues. Argh.
She made Sebastian kill a kitten! What kind of a girl is she? (So ok, yeah, there IS something wrong with kids these days as we are perfectly fine with humans being dismembered in front of our eyes and with gallons of blood fountaining in every direction, but we are fond of fluffy kittens and puppies and despise whoever hurts them)
I wished so hard she would reconsider and tell Sebastian to stop at the last moment. But now, she had to be a b!tch.
And really, she`s 15 now. And the demon said he unleashed "it" three years ago. So, uh, was she like 12 when she "forced Sebastian to take her virginity"? Omg, even I wasn`t that horny at 12 (and yeah, I was really horny at already 10/11, for a 10/11 year old kid, I mean)
My God, this girl is so twisted. And what`s with the wrist? Di she even have a wound? Or was it Ciel`s blood?..
Ow, Ciel is so cunning. Royal-like and statuesque. Love him.
Oh, I think it all looks like I`m envious of Skye. And damn right I am! I also want to have a sexy butler willing to fulfill my every dream. Though even if I want sometimes to be cold and uncaring and cool and badass - I end up feeling ashamed for even thinking about abandoning my middle-class family. And actually I`m not so ready to give up my humanity as well. But whatever, it`s not about me. It`s about this cold statue of a girl.
I so much hope now that Ciel was right. That it really will turn out as he had said. With Sebastian and Ciel reuniting and Skye, well, doing whatever she had been doing until Sebastian came. Though I would very much appreciate if she would be (kissed) tortured to death. Kitty-killer. My fangirl`s wrath knows no mercy.
However, I hopeI didn`t discourage you as I am known for doing that against my true intentions. I really look forward to the next update, so keepup the good work. Your plot bunnies amuse me to no end. |
 Squeehee 2009-11-30 . chapter 4 This fic is SEXY AWESOME. Also, I LOVE the developments in this chapter, and I can't wait to find out what happens next~ You have fantastic skill when it comes to mixing comedy with the super dark and horror. <3
And, I apologize if this is out of line and/or annoying of me to ask, but have you ever read the His Dark Materials trilogy? Because if so, I would LOVE to see the daemon concept inserted into Kuroshitsuji. <3
And I will not be the least bit offended if you tell me where to stick it. I know I probably deserve it. :D; |
 GoodieGoodGirl 2009-11-29 . chapter 4 poor skye. if she has spritual conversation with ciel, does that mean ciel is exist inside of her? and ciel is kinda jealous of her i think. she gets to be with sebastian. nice chapter as usual. please write more. |
 Yukimi 2009-11-29 . chapter 1 Omg, I thought I liked Skye at the start but after reading chapter 3 and 4...I really do despise her >o>
Poor Sebby..and Ciel as well! =( I'll continue waiting for your next update but I'm getting really worried where this is going ;_; *hugs sebby* |
 Koolneko22 2009-11-29 . chapter 4No! I thought Ciel may have been able to beat her! But she can't have destroyed him by breaking the mirror, he may have been inhabiting it to show himself to her, but he wasn't connected to the mirror etc. (I hope)
Though I don't know exacltly what he was...
But if the blood was his...
I thought at first the italics were Sebastian's mind or something, but it was Ciel! I was so happy.
But it's over?! Complete?! I really wanted Skye to get what was coming to her and for Ciel to reunite with Sebastian...
I can't wait to read more if you write it, but if not, I'll enjoy your other stories! |
 Genki-angel-chan 2009-11-22 . chapter 3Oh my God I hate her. Poor Sebastian. ;_; Ciel would have never ordered him to kill a cat! |
 Gingerbread Moon 2009-11-06 . chapter 3T-T My heart. It is broken. |
 Enigmatic Insignia 2009-11-01 . chapter 3I'm not giving much of a critique here, admittedly.
All I'm going to say is that, after reading this chapter, I had to listen to a few 'this girl's a crazy bitch and I'm dumping her ass, hard' songs just to get the vibe out of my system. And while there are certain pieces of literature that have been known to put me in that mood of being frustrated enough to seek out music for the purpose of venting an emotion, none of those titles invoke the reaction intentionally. It's impressive that you could do it on purpose, so you did an excellent job. Now, here's the aftermath.
But, really, how can she kill a kitten? That's on the same level as kicking puppies. Even 4chan, the cesspool of the internet, draws the line at hurting poor kitties! D: I, I, I'm appalled! I'm appalled and I'm swatting thin air to imagine I get to hit her on the nose! |
 Blackless Wing 2009-10-28 . chapter 3OMG. Poor kitty :(
She's to vain, conceited. Wanting all Sebby's love on her!
That crunch part made me cringe xD
I'll be awaiting for the next chapter! This is getting good :D |
 Gih Bright 2009-10-26 . chapter 3Poor kity! And poor Sebastian (?)
Okey, i liked see sebastian suffering.
Her name is Skye, nice name.
I know that i'm crazy, but i continue thinking she is Ciel, but she's tring be diferent of Ciel for Sebastian look her with Skye; no more with Ciel Phantomhive.
She wants Sebastian loving her, no who she was before.
My english is really terrible, i know D:'
I want a new chapter!
And please! Don't make Sebastian kill her!
bye =** |
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