I think Shun is a beautiful and brave young boy, even if he cries a lot, he is very brave. I like this character so much, and I think you do write him very well.
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What a beautiful thing!
I almost cry when I read the end of the fic, T.T Shun´s feelings are complicated but I love that Character.
Very Good Fic, Short and moving.

What a sad duty.

Shun doesn't want to fight but has to fight to simply keep the few things he does. Yet he's not depressed. He accepted it with his head held high.

As you can tell by now I'm a Shun Fangirl

It's very touching.

Poor Shun.

Beautiful fic!! I loved it!

Loved, loved, loved it! More than it! In some few words you captured Shun's personality (beyond that sweet boy that seems to cry everytime and always needs his brother's help) perfectly. I loved especially last paragraph, when he explains how he is growing up. People seem to think fiction characters are static, instead of characters who mature and change with time.
Congratulations for this beautiful piece.
(and sorry for the mistakes, English is not my 1st language)