Oh, my goodness! How precious! Six year old Little Joe is a doll but no more than the 18 year old protective big brother, Adam. Thanks for a great story and I'm looking foward to reading more of it. You've been subscribed! ;-)

POOR ADAM! :'( Great story, but please, WRITE MORE!

Another awesome chapter, I'm really enjoying this story

Short, but powerful chapter. A tunnel seems like a good place to get away, but how's Joe gonna get Adam out? He wouldn't just leave him behind!?

Yikes, sounds like both LJ and Adam are in deep trouble. Looking forward to seeing how they get out of this mess! Hurry back.

OMG! I knew it was too easy for Adam to rescue Joe that quick. Please tell me Adam isn't dead. Can't wait for more.

Another great chapter, just their luck - bushwacked. Still great, keep em comin

Great start. I think some of my best writing comes from when I am trying to "lose myself" and get away from the real world. Don't make us wait too long. Got to know what happens next.

I love the start, don't keep us hanging to long. We need to know what happens next. Great job