very touching, I like)

This was beautiful. I wish it was longer though...
Loved Zack's line in the end)

Awww...So darn right adorable and sad...Wish Zack can be with along his family! *sniffs* Good jeevas, Zack and Cloud have (five) children? Wahaha... Awesome! Loved this! Really... Reno, better watch out, yo! _ And I can really imagine cute lil baby Zack!

Ahhh I was crying. You wrote it so delicately. I want to read this 1000 more times.

It's so sweet and sad! Very good. 6-

That made me cry! Anyway, it was really sweet.