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Reviews for: A Change for the Best
ca
2009-11-11 . chapter 5
write more please
xesa
2009-10-14 . chapter 4
WRITE MORE PLEASE
Aoi Maboroshii-Chan
2009-08-30 . chapter 2
Sorry, I didn't notice that you already wrote some of it!

So far, it is pretty good. I like that you have a logical reason for Lettuce getting a bit of a personality change. Most stories they just randomly get new personalities for no reason. My only problem is, what happened to Aoyama? Though thats just a minor thing, it should be explained eventually for the story to work and make sense. Other than that, it was good.

Well, thanks for entering and I can't wait to read the next chapters!
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