Man I'm kinda jealous that Cadel had such a cool dad but most of all that Cadel can be himself... Cadel was scared that he might end up like Prosper but all he wanted was for Cadel not to become nothing... I love the story I hope you can make another just as great as this one.

wow you have just summarized one of the most complictsed storys and have captured jinks's characters completely it's beatutiful!

Whoa! Cool last chapter! Didn't expect that, pretty much poetry!

Ah, that last bit almost made me want to cry! Very sweet, and probably right in line with how Cadel and Prosper's relationship would go if they did live together.

Brillant! Hahaha. I LOVE Prosper! This is great!

"You wouldn't REALLY shoot me, would you?"

"You wouldn't REALLY give me a reason to, would you?"

Hahaha! Love it!

Are you retarded? Is English not your native language?

I couldn't even get through the first chapter-I cringed so hard that I think I might have sprained something! If old man Prosper was real and alive, I'm pretty sure he'd hire someone to give you a nice new pair of concrete shoes. That or he'd just have your hands chopped off so you couldn't write this drivel anymore. God, I can't believe I even took the time to write you this very helpful and constructive review, when that time could have been spent by me drinking myself into a stupor so that I'd forget all about this rancid fart of a fanfiction! Please stop writing,

Your Friendly Neighborhood Pillar of Hate

Just as good as the other! I thought this chapter was just as good as the other! I love the series and this chapter as much! PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER! PLEASE!

This was great! I thought about this chapter over and over again for hours! Really interesting and thought-provoking! I found this chapter perfect and nearly screamed with delight when I found there was another! Just so well-written and thought-provoking! 10/10!

Except for that one time...? o.o

Anyways, this turned out to be a lot like I'd imagine life between them would be like if Cadel chose to stay with Prosper.

I really like these oneshots! )

Aw! Cute!

...There isn't really much more I can say. I'm not good at reviews :/

Cadel being grounded

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This chapter is really powerful, the parallels you show between the two characters, as well as their obvious differences. I loved this story(this is most likely my third time reading it) and I just had to leave you some positive feedback to let you know what a great job you did. Awesome writing, keep up the good work!

The Light of Reason

Aw this is so cute...especially the end when Cadel gives his daddy a great big bear hug. I honestly can't imagine a hug going over well with Prosper, but who can resist Cadel's baby blues? You have such a great writing style and your ideas are fantastic. Another great chapter!

The Light of Reason

I love the way you wrote this, it's sweet and terrifying at the same time! You have a great sense of the characters, and I really enjoyed this chapter. On to the next one quickly, before my parents find out I'm still awake!...I wonder if my dad has a handgun?...I certainly hope not D:

The Light of Reason