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PandaBear0826
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
OMG I LOVED THAT IT WAS SO AWESOME!
yourdorkALWAYS
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
OMG THAT WAS SO ADORABLE! [: I know it wouldn't really make sense to add another chapter to this, but could you!? Seriously, I'll totally read it.
Evildevilangel
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
Oh. I so loved this. Particularly because of how totally whipped I am.
iLoveRomance2oo9
2009-10-10 . chapter 1
ok even tho i thought finn was kinda ooc, it was still cute! :)
Anonymous
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
AWESOME story :)
It was like, argh!
I'm out of words for how good it was!
Maiqu
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
Loved it
LunaMystik
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
This was really, really sweet. I can totally see Finn being this dependent on his Rachel fix.
helaluvE
2009-09-15 . chapter 1
This isvery sweet and funny. I liked it :)
kaypgirl
2009-09-15 . chapter 1
I could actually picture this being an episode on the show, especially the coach punching another coach and the meth lab.
Erin
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
this was a very well written piece of literature, but I believe that some of the wording choices could have been changed to make it sound more in juncture with the characters. occasionally, a characters thoughts and his speech wouldn't use the same vernacular, making it difficult to follow. there were also certain occasions in which it was unclear who was speaking. the most important part of your story is always the audience, who you're writting for. if they do int understand a point in your story, that's all they will be able to focus on, degrading the legitimacy of your story. overall, I think it was a very well written tale, but u
it just needs a few tweaks here and there to male it that much better.
Samantha828
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
so cute!
anonymous
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
This was absolutely perfect! I can't wait to read more from you.
Dontia
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
This story is so incredibly adorable.
Owl Emporium
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
That was really cute. Great job! (:
.Hello.World.Thank.you.World.
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
I loved this! It was soo cute. I love fics where Rachel and Finna are already together and this one definitely goes to the top of my list!! :)
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