luv this continuation!

Nice :D

I find it interesting that you can write 3500 odd words about an encounter with Kiba, Shino and Hinata, and getting a soothe bell, and still keep it interesting.

more please! i love it its so natural

You've managed to tke the Naruto families into Pokemon perfectly, I could easily see them being how you described them. Hinata was in character throughout it which is good. Naruto's gym battle should be fun.

This one-shot is absolutely brilliant.

Light and sweet. I'm a total sucker for Hinata, and your depiction of her is always so innocent that I cannot help but squeal in delight. It was a nice way for Hinata to help Naruto, subtle but meaningful. Hopefully, the bell will do it's job and make 'Demon' a little more cooperative in the future.

Awesome little story you have going on here. I like the way you perfectly integrated each of the Naruto characters' personalities and family traits into the pokemon world. So please continue this wonderful story and I'll keep reading it! Ja!

I don't think this even has to be a crack fic. Personally i have found the lack of pokemon stories to be a bit sad. They bring back nice memories. And its great how you incorrperated naruto into the pokemon world. I think this would be a great story if continued. Hope to see the next chapter (if there is one) soon :D

...I can only say two things about this story and the previous one without fangushing.

1) I feel both of these would be better in one fic rather then two oneshots. then you could add any continuations.

2)...I want to make pokemon suggestions for the characters so badly, but then I'll get carried away. RAEG!

It's too bad this is only a series of oneshots - it could go so much farther. Oh well, I'm not one to look at gift horse in the mouth - I eagarly await the next one.

I like the story.

You have once again managed to get me hooked on one of your fics. Great piece and I particularly enjoyed the little details that separated this world from the Naruto world. Cute scene with Hinata and Naruto.

I'm always rather hesitant to read Pokemon fanfiction (likely due to that horrible anime) but the two you've put out have been excellent. I really hope to see more.

This would make a really great socondary story. I wouldn't mind seeing it as a whol sotry instead of just small one-shots, even if it was less frequent than seal shatter.