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Reviews for: A Slight Change of Plans
Poetoffire
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
Pardon the pun, but that was well-done fanfic.

In other Soul Eater fanfiction I've read, the grasp on Kid's character is shaky at best, swinging wildly between total OCD maniac incapable of having a second without providing comic relief and slightly high-strung but otherwise normal student that has me asking, "Who is this again?"

But everything here is so IC and believable, with all the characters, that it seems like godsend.

Great job!
ObsidianDaydream
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Hmm...I could go for some steak now...weird right? >_>

Uh anyway, awesome story! Loved Kid going absolutely off his rocker over cooking steak and his hopelessly romantic reasoning xD. Liz's internal 'you crazy fool, you're already all I need' speech was a really nice touch because she knew he wouldn't listen even if she screamed it at him. Patti's words of wisdom were priceless.

Keep up the great work! Can't wait for more of your special brand of crazy with these three =D

(Sorry for destroying your perfect 8 reviews again! Don't hurt me Kid! ^_^')
evrael
2009-09-08 . chapter 1
this is made of love and win. LOL! the kiss was a surprise, Kid's confession (i think) was a surprise, too. i enjoyed this, thankies for the good read.
VampireCabbit
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
Thanks for this, it was a lot of fun, i always enjoy reaidng about the bizarre Death trio.

What more can i say? Ive nothing to write here cause it was written perfectly! Patty was fun, Kid was nuts, Liz showed her sensitive but still kinda tough personality perfectly, and im surprised Death didnt pop out of the bathroom mirror when Liz was showering.

So yeah, well done all round. have a cookie. i dont think this is marked as complete, so ill just alert just in case.
evilpheonix94
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
aww!that was so cute!X3
Sunder the Gold
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
This was SO awesome.
Anzer'ke
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
Excellent stuff, I think Kidd is quite possibly the second most disfunctional god I've ever heard of or read about.

However The Earth Goddess of Kurohime has beaten even him, crazy, psychotic, schitzo freak.

Great story, write more.

Does anything else need to be said?

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.
Quercus
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
very nice, your grasp on Kid's neurosis continues to impress, as well as Liz and Patti's role in controlling it... sometimes. Little domestic moments like this are so often lacking in manga like Soul Eater and I'm very glad you give us your take on them. Well done! (no pun intended)
Naza
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
"Aw" for the last part! this was very original, I mean, a steak? xD and very IC!

I had a nice time reading it.
Writer of Whispers
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
AWESOME. I love hilarious, goofy Kidd, and you managed to keep it up throughout the entire chapter. I would try to critique you, but I was too busy laughing through the story. =)

I love your grasp of these three characters (Kidd, Liz, and Patty, I mean). I just now realized that you wrote a few other of my favorite Soul Eater fanfics, too. A job excellently done. =D
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