I like this so far. The characters seem quite, well, in character. Good job.

-eggy

Hooray for multiple-chapter Good Omens fanfiction! Recently everything's been drabble. Please keep writing for us with too much spare time!

I am fascinated by your plotline, which is, while not exactly original, at least a new version of a several dozen other "babysitting"/"kindapping" fanfic, and pretty good. Hoping to read more.

(Note: Agnes is on a "plane", not "plain", I think. This sort of thing annoys me if I leave it alone too long, so there you are. Your grammar is mostly pretty good.)

I'm not usually much of a reviewer, but I'm really enjoying your story and have added it to my alerts list :-)

Excellent start. You've really kept faithful to the spirit and style of the book, and the storyline is intriguing. I look forward to reading more.

I LOVE IT AND YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE.
Better review and logged in next time.
My head hurts.

...um...can't Crowley just say "Yeah...about that...I'm probably going to be one of those demons..."

Poor guy. Demon's aren't supposed to have morals, loyalty to friends, and soft spots for sweet kids.

"Away from my angel, foul demon!" indeed. What a cutie.

DUN DUN DUN!! And the plot thickens. It jumped around, but that was fine. Very well written. I especially liked the part where Crowley yelles "SON OF A-". XD. Very amusing.

Hope you update soon.

OMG!
Amazing fic! It's really interesting!
Please continue it >_<
Hope to read you soon ;)
PD: Sorry for my awful english n_nUU

This is really well written and I love how you maintain the spirit and style of Good Omens. Keep up the good work.

Me likey. I can't wait to see more of this.

FINALLY.
A good Good Omens fic.
I applaud ye.

I like this! Very well written :">
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Interesting. Who or what is Molly? And why is there a Duke of Hell named after an Egyptian fertility god, reporting to an Earl whose name sounds suspiciously like a misspelt Hindu god? ;) I must say I loved Crowley in this, when he opened the door to the two minions. All suave and cool. xD And oh, Adam. Really. I see he certainly loves Earth and earthly pleasures.

Does Aziraphale know about Heaven's plans?

This is well-written and has a very interesting premise, and you have me hooked! I definitely want to know what comes next, and I'm putting this on Story Alert. Please update soon! ;)

~ Sivaroobini

Intriguing. A very well-written first chapter. It has MOUNDS of potential. XD

Wow, this was one very promising 1st chapter. It certainly perked my interest :) I hope you continue soon, you're on my alert list.
Yours, Akhuna