|Reviews for Skywriting|
| PoorQueequeg 12/11/12 . chapter 1
Ah so lovely! Yes I can believe the Vulcan girl writes the most gorgeous poetry!
| Bandbabe 9/7/09 . chapter 1
Wow, this story is beautifully written! I enjoyed reading Nyota's POV. The tone of this story is fresh and original. I love how Nyota's is able to read peoples' eyes. Thank you for sharing.
| zestyenterprize 8/28/09 . chapter 1
oh... lovely! I really loved the meaningful looks and how cautious they both are. Really enjoyed this. More?
| Birdgirl90 8/27/09 . chapter 1
That was beautiful.
| Mackenzie 8/26/09 . chapter 1
So, so good. Love your Spock and Nyota. Great Job!
| mykardia 8/26/09 . chapter 1
oh that is so sweet! this was a really well written story! very eloquent and it flowed nicely. I love the way you give us all the details of her past...and the way his love is so innocent and her response just as sweet ) beautifully done!
| lostzuner 8/26/09 . chapter 1
That was very beautiful. You have captured Nyota very well.
| gppr 8/26/09 . chapter 1
I loved this, but Nyota in particular. I think you captured everyone's personalities very well. And I really, really liked how she could read the feelings in his eyes and how she decided to be bold, yet respectful of his ways.
| NeverDust 8/26/09 . chapter 1
I thought that was very well done. You stayed true to character (I've only seen the 2009 movie as well) and gave a viable, romantic way they may have originally gotten together. Love it. Thank you!
| StarTrekFanWriter 8/26/09 . chapter 1
I really liked how you portrayed Nyota's scholarly life. She isn't perfect, or a genius, but she works hard.
I'm not sure about the relationship between her and Spock though. They never talk really. So really what it comes down to is lust, not love.
Although I suppose this sort of relationship is common in college days it makes me sad because I can't see it lasting.
| jazzie2525 8/26/09 . chapter 1
This was so good, despite some misspellings. U should do a continuation, multi chaptered fic, would love to read more! I love the slow build up to the conclusion
| kendrat199 8/26/09 . chapter 1
I really loved this story! There's very few first-person stories that are done so well and even fewer Nyota Uhura-centered, so this was monumental. I loved that she had experienced a somewhat tragedy that led to her new beginnings with Spock. The fact that she had learned to read the eyes of humans from her father's illness and then use that same method toward Spock was amazing. I also loved that at first, she did not like Gaila, but in the end truly loves her as a friend. How can one deny an Orion anything? For the first time reading hundreds of ST XI fanfics, I have imagined the ZQ Spock and the Saldana Uhura, instead of the LN original and the NN first.
Did you mean "the" Academy, rather than just "Academy"?
I really enjoyed this. Thanks once more.
| juzwanna 8/26/09 . chapter 1
well done. the build up was very good-and you "got" Uhura just right. Spock too. I hope there's a sequel
| Aphrodite420 8/25/09 . chapter 1
This was such a beautiful story. Your style of writing was almost poetic. I love how you slowly built up their relationship.
Why didn't you post this sooner? And maybe you could write a sequel?