Ok, so I wanted to review this story a long, long time ago, but it seems that I didn't get to and a lot has been happening in this past months and I totally forgot about it. I just wanted to speak out all my feelings out of my chest. Anyway, back to my review:

I, who's also been reading articles about Kingdom Hearts 358/2 days before, have felt a series of mix emotions the moment I've read how Xion seems to have a much greater moments with Roxas. Believe me, I am highly disappointed from this discovery. But the moment I found your fic, I've once again gained my full trust as a fan of Namixas couple. Still, the doubtfulness remain hidden in my heart but I can assume that there are a lot more Namixas fans than Roxion fans out there that maintain their royalty in supporting the RoxasXNamine love. So it really turns me on. I thank you for writing this fic for it really made me happy. I just knew from the very start that someone would write something like this. It really gives out a comforting aura to dispersing my insecurities. I'm just so glad to find that many people continue to remain on the good side despite their acknowledgement on 358/2 days.

By the way, on with my comments about your story:
I just LOVE how you actually wrote down all of the thoughts I also have in mind about how Namine would feel about this. To be honest, I was mad at how Roxas seems to be a "ladiesman" throughout the game. I hate it when I think about how another girl besides Namine would also have a stronger bond to Roxas (COUGHXIONCOUGH). I like the, “The only reason why I don’t have a heart is because I gave it to you.” thing--it's sort of cheesy but I definitely love it! :D It sort of goes with this cute poem I found in the internet:

I seem to have a problem,
I think I lost my heart.
I can't find it anywhere,
it's like I'm searching in the dark.
I was beginning to panic,
wondering what to do,
But then I remembered,
I gave it to you.
XD

I also like how Roxas seems to have endless reasons against Namine's stubborness about herself bing worthless:

“I am worthless,” She muttered stubbornly, “Look at me - I can’t do anything useful. I can’t fight-”
“So what if you can't?”
“-I can’t defend myself-”
“Because that's my job.”
“-the only thing I can do is draw these stupid, silly pictures that don’t mean anything-”
“They’re not stupid or silly,” He pulled her over to the drawing hanging over her bed, “I don’t think that one’s silly at all.”

I definitely laugh at that part. Poor Namine, having know more defense to support what she believe in, haha!
That's all I can say.
Bye then!

-Storycreater

I cried.
:<

I can relate to Naminé so well in this too, we literally think the same. But Roxas saves the day!

Although, I wasn't expecting Marluxia to be one of the taunters. (I haven't played 358/2 days - my dog chewed it up xD)

'Twas very good :3

Kitty
xzx

it was realy good

aw... that's so cheesy!!

Aw, that was absolutely adorabe :]
This was very well written, and just wow :D
It's true- you can't really hate Xion nor Namine xD
Even if Roxas/Xion seem like a good match, I'll keep on rooting for Roxas/Namine cuz they just look so right for each other :3
Thank you for making this!

Written REALLY well. A nice touch near the end there :]

Keep writing please!! :D

:3 :3 :3 :3 :3

OKAY. THIS IS THE SWEETEST NAMIXAS STORY I HAVE READ.

I LOVED IT. Especially this part: He reached for one of her hands and placed it over his chest, where his heart should be. “The only reason why I don’t have a heart is because I gave it to you.” That really made me happy :)

Nice job! Hope you can make another story like this c:

:3 :3 :3 :3 :3

HAHAHA! Did anyone else catch the pun in here where Roxas said, "That's like falling in love with yourself?" Well, I did. :D And those are my feelings exactly! Sure, I guess Xion and Roxas would go great together, since they ARE each other, but that's it exactly - they are the same person. That would be weird.
Now Namine on the other hand, she's Kairi, and Roxas is Sora, and Kairi and Sora are in love, so I don't think Namine and Roxas had a choice - they were in love before they were even made. They're just so darn cute! :D
Loved this, I felt Namine's pain as I read it - so raw and real. Gosh I loved this.

Aw
how cute
I absolutely loved it

I really like the idea of your plot. And with your words, you described the situation really well! Great job! I love this story. Roxas is so great with his words. XD

This was fantastic.
I love how you describe each little thing.
It's prefect :)

Very cute concept. I really enjoy this one. Makes me dislike Xion's character though when I actually like her a bit. But even if that is the case power to roxine!

aw!TwT so cute! so sweet! i love this oneshot so much! favorite!~

Wow! Absolutely loved it! :) I wish it really happened in the game...*disappointed fangirl sigh*
Excellent job, as usual ^-~

AW! Loved it!