I dont know if you're still on this site but if you are you should make this a multichapter story! It is very interesting story!

You could make this into a very very interesting multichapter fic... Its calling u:P hahaha:)

aw plz continue it sounds like an awesome story in d makings :D

Hehe. Just clicked this story through LJ. This story was written really powerfully, great job!

From A Fanfiction Angel