Wow! This is very different, but great too. I think you've worked well with the legend, and I love the way it's intwined with Moulin Rougue. The imagery is amazing. I'm glad there's a sequel! I'm going to find that now. I hope they make it to each other some how. I also wonder how Logan died and why Jean thinks its her fault? Is this strictly movie verse? Maybe I'll figure it out when I read the sequel.

its different but i like it a lot

That was...a bit odd...and quietly disturbing...(shivers) Very good!

WOW LOVE IT I HOPE YOU DO CONTINUE THIS STORY.