 slpytlak 12/28/09 . chapter 9Yay! You're finally finished. I can't wait for more of your stories that you put on hold. |
 slpytlak 12/28/09 . chapter 8All right! Malefor is gone for good! |
 slpytlak 12/28/09 . chapter 7Dang, I've never seen Draco so aggressive. |
 Skullgal94 12/28/09 . chapter 9Wow, what a great ending and Spyro's now a big brother. Great job!:) |
 Skullgal94 12/28/09 . chapter 8Wow, can't wait for the final chapter. Great job and good luck!:) |
 Skullgal94 12/28/09 . chapter 7Oh my, thanks goodness Spyro's okay. Great job and good luck!:) |
 Skullgal94 11/18/09 . chapter 6This is so sad. Great job and good luck!:) |
 slpytlak 11/17/09 . chapter 6Oh man, Ignitus passed away. |
 Skullgal94 11/2/09 . chapter 5Wow, hope they'll be alright. Great job and good luck!:) |
 slpytlak 11/2/09 . chapter 5Breaker: Luster, does that ring a bell or a clue?
Luster*sighs and slaps him* You make no sense.
Breaker: I hate it when you slap me.*laughs* I absolutly love that part. I hope you add more funny part between them in the next chapter. |
 Skullgal94 9/22/09 . chapter 4Great, they were able to find water. Great job and good luck!:) |
 slpytlak 9/22/09 . chapter 4Wow, I'm so proud of Spyro. |
 slpytlak 9/8/09 . chapter 3Whoa, Spyro reunuted with his real mother. I hope they find water soon. By the way, you should have another evil dragon with Malefor, just like in the movie. |
 JJB88 9/8/09 . chapter 3Awsome chapter. |
 Skullgal94 9/8/09 . chapter 3Wow, that's sweet Spyro reunited with his mom. Great job and good luck!:) |