This is really good. Please update soon.

Me again...I know you haven't written in a long time, but you should really continue!

This is great! Good job! Keep going!!

OH MY GOSH!!! this is a really good story!!! keep writing. You really have a talent for writing...... Let me know when you have a new chapter up and going.... karah85@hotmail.com!! lotz~a~Lub ~*Karah*~

cool its pretty good.

please add more s/a, though i know it's k/e...

It was a grat story. I luv it. Come up w/ the enning soon.!!:D

that was great i cant wait to read the rest!!!!!!!

YEA!!!!!!!!! i LOVE s/a!!!!

good job do more with eric caint wait to read the rest!!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! shawn canNOT like another girl!!!!! i'm sorry- but un uh.

on a good note- i really like the dialogue. i could actually picture them saying what u wrote. i've rarely if ever have seen that before.