kelw,cool,kool(i love the word it can be said so many ways heheh;) fic!is it only one chapter long? or is there gonna be a sequel? good luck!Ja Ne!

bra honey little sister-in-law sister of my neice's husbend you know you love my brother the way pan[my neice] loves trunks[pan's husbend] cause he loves you it's writen in his diary!haha get fic!

Awww... that was just adorable! Write a sequel!!!

OMGOMGOMG U SUCK!!!!!!!!! THAT IS ABSOLUTELY THE WORST F**CING STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!! U SHOULD QUIT WRITING WHILE UR AHEAD B*TCH!!!!!!

Was that it? Was that the end?? PLEASE SAY IT WASN'T THE END!!! Ur story is SO sweet! Would you mind e-mailng me when you update? If you update... You'll ha'ta update, course I need to know what's gonna happen, and if you won't tell me, I'll hunt you down and... and... and do something really mean to ya! Yeah that's it! I'll hurt you badly! (I don't really mean that. =P) Ja ne. Nimbus.
P.S. My e-mail adress is Nimbus119@hotmail.com

more please

Hey Halloween is over cut the scary T/p crap....take pan out of this story or else rate it HORROR cause that's what pan is!!!!!!