oh my word i love this story soooooooo much! i saw the movie last night and one thing lead to another and i found this story please please please update its been over two years and people are still reading this. it the best story i've read.

Hey! I had JUST watched the Brothers Grimm movie and i decided id look for fanfiction. I'm so glad i did because this was such an amazing story! I really like how you wrote it and how it was only the brotherly type love and i really like that. There isnt that much of that! This story that you wrote is so amazing! i cant think of anything wrong about it, seriously! I'm also glad that you finished it! i hate it when a story isnt finished, as well! Sorry, this is a really long review! I just loved this story so much! im surprised it didnt get that many reviews! If i had read this when you first started writing it, I would've reviewed every chapter! haha :P Well, i just wanted to say i LOVED it and it was AMAZING! Honestly this is one of the best stories ive ever read on fanfiction! Good Job!

Okay, do this is a totally amazing story. And I know it's not likely,bit I'd REALLY like it if you continued it! :)

oh my goodness I just started reading this today; it's bloody amazing! The writing style is perfect, showing realistic, raw emotions without being overdone! I'm officially ADDICTED to this story, and I BEG of you to update soon! Keep up the great work!

-A FAN

This is the end? That doesn't seem like an ending. But hey, it's your story. I loved it from the start hun. There were spelling errors here and there, but nothing the interfered with the story greatly. Thank you for writing it. Love ya!

Oh...my...gosh...

This just may be THE BEST story EVER! The Will drabble/whatever you want to call it (I call it drabble, but whatever) was just AWESOME. I think you finally got there characters just right. And DUDE you HAVE to update this because if you don't then I'll die and if I die then millions of puppies shall die along with me. DO YOU WANT THE PUPPIES TO DIE?

...I didn't think so.

! xD

Oh poor Jake. And I actually think that he's the younger one, not Will, but I only saw the movie once, so I guess I could have it backwards. Anyway, this is still awesome!

Oh this chapter is by-far the best. I love it! You've got a great way of writing this...um...angst? Family roadblock? xD Whatever it is, you can write it! (Oh, and I totally have the same kind of writers block that you get. It sucks, doesn't it?)

I love this story so far! :D It's greatly amazing.

*in love* OH MY GOSH! YOU HAVE TO UPDATWE! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!

OMG! This is great. I really hope that you continue this story. i am hanging on your every word. i want to know how the resolve this.

Aww this is soo incredibly good! Oh my God, I really hope you continue this because I'm completely hooked! You've donea wonderful job with both of the brothers, it doesn't seem forced or OOC or anything. Great job, I really hope you continue! :D

Awww ( Poor Jake! Still loving this though! :D

Awwwwww :D