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Reviews for: Unhealthy Competition
roguegirl9929
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Again...as always, it made me laugh. Very, very well done!
invisigoth3
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
I just love this story! The humour is amazingly written. The story weaves in and out among their ramblings, but still gives the reader a great tale. Well Done!
Sharnorasian Empire
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Great stuff, it's really good

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ilysia
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
Absolutely brilliant. *snorts with laughter* So humorous and so well written, too! That's an unusual and fantastic combination. There's really so much here to love that I can't possibly name everything. A few highlights, however: Aragorn sitting on the steps. For some reason that image was a particularly vivid one. The growing relationship between Aragorn and Faramir was a delight, as was, of course, the interaction between Gimli, Eomer & Legolas.

And then there are Elladan and Elrohir. There's really nothing more you can say about them.

"I give you the leaders of the free people of Middle Earth." *snort* Bravo!
Jebb
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
An absolute delight I loved Aragorn's concern over his dream as well as the glimpse of his growing relationship with Faramir.
But the stars of this piece were of course Eomer, Gimli and Legolas who were wonderful their bickering and arguments had me laughing out loud as did Legolas's response to Aragorn about not lieing!
The twins had better watch out
Laurenke1
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
I do think that Elrond is very glad that he has left Middle Earth. Imagine that his sons bring about the doom of Middle Earth
White Wolf1
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
Leave it to Legolas, Gimli and the twins to be knee deep in a controversy. I loved Legolas's protestations of innocence and all the finger pointing. It gave me a good laugh. The twist on the old saying at the end was perfect.
Lilly McShepin
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
Fantastic! You are one of the few writers upon this site that can manage to write a decent humor! Great job - you had me laughing through the entire thing!

Heck - I'm still giggling.
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