love it!

omg i almost cried! but it was funny to see the part where edward whined. LOL good job you're amazing!

Aw! Bella is so sweet keep it up!

this make me cry... so kawai

cute.

Hope you share more of Elizabeth and Edward Sr's point of view too?

Does Edward Sr. look down on his son more then Elizabeth knows? Did he read the note too?

Well...at least there are time limits so Elizabeth is well rounded on doing other things too..I could see her watching 24-7 then Edward Sr. would really have trouble getting her attention...hmn..nah..just kidding...for I'm sure their relations would want her attentions too?
Nice that Edward is still trying for a new vehicle.

caww

Nice to leave a note to the souls of his parents.

Interesting to have Bella have feelings when being close to Edward's family's grave markers.

caww

Please, please, please update soon! Loved it!

Aw, so cute! You should turn this into an actual story! XD I hope you consider it!

I really enjoyed reading this. Naturally, it broke my heart, but I am anxious to see where you go with it!

Update soon please, it's pretty good!

Please update)